Cool game. I really like the atmosphere and the twin-peaks vibes. I like the characters and talking to them. So far, I'd say the presentation is top notch, especially the pre-rendered fmv cutscenes. The music is great too. At the moment, I think the game is too esoteric. Weird fever-dream sequences only work when the player has a base-line sense of reality. I imagine the parts where you are talking to jojo are in reality, while the parts with frankie and the ghost girl are dreams? But then again, it wouldn't make sense if it is that way. For instance, why do you go from a car crash to a mansion? There's only a certain amount of "what the fucks happening" that a person can take, before they will just alt-f4 and I came very close to it. I'd like to understand more of why Jojo has such interest in Sven or why she somehow owns a huge mansion despite being a young person. Basically just flesh out the setting a lot more and clearly separate what is reality and what is schizo dream sequences. Ideally, I'd like Jojo to be a character grounded in reality to contrast with characters like Frankie and for Jojo to give the player an idea of what the players goal in the game is. I don't know if I'm a shitty reader or something, but the general language is too complicated for me to absorb fully. It makes it quite exhausting to read and I know I'm not fully understanding it. Looking forward to returning to this in the future. Keep it up!