Intriguing and obscure story with many details. Unfortunately, it wasn't as good as I expected.
Right from the start, I was amazed by the quality and design of the game. The office set-up really surprised me. It was all done well, until the main character goes to this house and for no reason at all starts investigating. I don't know that the flaws of the narrative are due to the translation, but this definitely needs an update. Not to mention that, the collision system is a bit weird and I was not able to open the doors first time, only after numerous times. Nevertheless, I understand this is your first game and I would say, all the things mentioned in the video are indeed impressive.
Best of luck with the future developments. Cheers!