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I loved Dead Dating and thought it was really great, but it suffered from some poorly written and poorly worded English (possibly a poor translation?) which unfortunately breaks the fantasy. This is especially evident when the voice actors have to repeat these awkwardly worded lines, which in many cases don't sound like they're said by (what are supposed to be) native English speakers.

I mention this because I don't want to see the same issues in this game, and hopefully the writing gets some solid proofreading before release.

Beyond this, I'm really excited to see where this game goes and am eagerly awaiting the full version! Thanks for all your hard work!

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Thanks for the feedback, I actually hired a proofreader before I did D.D. voiceover works.

I can only said that proofreader cheated my money!!!!! 🤯

P.C.H will do the proofreader in this project so I believe the result will be great. ;)

If you want to use someone else please let me know!  I'd be happy to take the job.  I am 40 and have lived in the American Midwest my whole life.  I have a masters degree as well so I can help if needed!