Heya! im xxyumekoxx15 or just Yumeko ^^ I was to shy to text till now but i guess i could try? (sorry for my bad english sometime...)
heres my Feedback and my mind on The Visual Novel:
If you would need a female voice actor at some point id gladly help! So once the mind is set on adding Voice Acting id love to sign up^^
Recently been in my Visual Novel Rush soooo ive Streamed like 2 Visual Novels now on Twitch or so? (Not 14DWY yet tho)
Also i really love the game, it gives you the sweet "tingle" in the back of your mind and the Adrenaline to keep reading!
These days its Rare to find good Visual Novels in a Style like this.. so when i found out about it i wanted to play it, and im now just waiting till more content comes out!
You REALLY have talent! so i hope once This is done you have more to come!
ONLY READ IF YOU WANT SPOILERS ON SOME PARTS! (Feedback included)
I Encountered this over Youtube, since i finished all 3 Days already and im just keepin my eyes spread for a new update/devlog
ive also loved the aspect that wenn you start a new playtrough "he" realizes your there again. Was quite suprised and not gonna lie it made me smirk quite a bit! He might be Obsessive over us but im sure we all are over him the same way (in some parts) XD <3
There are multiple parts where i was just jumping up and down on my chair since im a person that *dives* into the story if you can relate to that at all :3
As i said i dive into the story I didnt get the Bad Ending till day 3 on my second playtrough but i was going in blind, so once everything turned all scaryish i knew there will be one but it still got me to shriek up a bit
Also as i mentioned, the Story gives you the Tingle you need to keep reading! Tbh i didnt stop till i reached the end of Day 3 on my first playtrough... ^^" heheh...
The Menu is quite nice^^ but the only thing i was a bit confused about was the +18 option... id be nice to know for who you pick the *cough cough* Bottom part for (lmao <3)
to add onto here the little Ren behind the sticky note made me chuckle i really love the idea of little Rens watching you from diffrent screens and you can find him by interacting so maybe you could add a view more "hideing places"? (pwetty pwease?)
Thank you for making this amazing Story we all cant wait to see Continue!<3
- xxyumekoxx15
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Hiya Yumeko! Thank you so much for the kind review and feedback ^^
And thank you for your interest in being a VA for the 14 Days With You! Once I'm happy with the current state of the game, I'll most likely start looking into creating a casting call for voice actors on Twitter/X. So feel free to keep an eye on that if you're still interested!
As for your confusion about the 18+ option: I've actually already made changes to it a month ago! The genitalia system has been completely revamped — and it now includes different top, bottom, and body choices. However, this version of the demo is currently only available for Discord Server Boosters to play ^^;
But!! Thanks again for sharing your thoughts and leaving a comment! I appreciate it very much ♡