This game has an interesting and fun design, I like the effects you put on the words. It is a little confusing for me to figure out if I have the key or not, it might need a more direct way to tell the play about this information. Ahout the story, I would say that a longer story can be more engaing and can hold more details, for me, the story now feels a little rushed, I do want to spend more time playing this game and really emerge myself into the story. If you don't want the story to be long, that's fine! Maybe you can add more passage to let the player explore even though they couldn't find anything, it might add more suspantion to the game. All in all, a good and fun game!