A nice lighthearted visual novel~
The story is warming and chill, with joy and laughter in it!!!
The character art is great! And I love how it seems to be not so out of place with the background~
Music and sfx are also nice~
There seem also no coding bugs around, I didn't even notice that until I wrote this haha!
My suggestions for improvement would probably be focusing on how the font seems a little bit uncanny when they're transitioning in and how some word seems to stick to the other like glue (the word "off" for example), although maybe that's intentional~
The music and sound effects in some parts also feel out of place and too overwhelming sometimes, such as the snowstorm at the title screen and the infinite cat purr (which is nice ngl)~
Keep creating!
Also p.s (I know crediting your idol is cool, but credit yourself as well!)
I was suprised when the link sends me to Shiori account instead. But yeah, dedication I guess!