Hi Moro!
I had my first read-through. Great Game!
I found some typos and wrote down two or three thoughts I had while reading. I put them below. Please know, that they are no critique whatsoever, just some thoughts I had and that I’d like to share.
- “She queen also names a keeper for each one of them” p. 62
- Page 60 “, basing they hierarchy on the city and its ruler, the queen.”
- Page 65 “Astake”.
- Page 33 says gain +1 focus on Weak hit, Face Danger move does not say so on p. 44.
- What is the stat for the healing action role? p. 34
- Character creation is at the beginning, but Lineages change the rules for the creation. That came a bit surprising.
- Link inciting incident on page 29.
Thanks again for the fun I’m having with this!
P.S. Oh, And I’d love to have a table of content in the moves reference. That would speed things a bit, especially in the beginning.
P.P.S. “, you gain experience ponts per”, p. 39.
P.P.P.S. The Form a Bond move on p. 52 says, earn XP according to rank, but then lists ticks and boxes as if it were a progress track. Shouldn’t XP be earned in whole points?