Overall i like this, and can't wait for more.
Just one complaint, make links(hair length etc) different color from text.
I guess i reached the end, but in case it's a bug still gonna post it
save: https://pixeldrain.com/u/GKmdpiBT
also still says chapter 2 in chapter 3
another bug
save:https://pixeldrain.com/u/7oudhSHk
repeating paragraph:
save:https://pixeldrain.com/u/4JhRzEHW