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Good:

I like the concept, the cat feels like a cat when they speak, and all of the dialogue options make sense. I feel like I am being held hostage by a cat that continuously changes their mind.

Bad:

I am not certain what this has to do with passages, and I didn't realize that I was supposed to be a human when I was playing. I thought I was another cat that had been kidnapped.

Ugly:

I think the main thing I would change is the layout, if the image was on the left and the dialogue was on the right, I think it would look a bit more polished. Also,  if you wanted to go into more detail with your images instead of drawing them you could use this site: https://manytools.org/hacker-tools/convert-images-to-ascii-art/

Overall:

I like the game and the concept. it feels fleshed out enough, so there is no need to apologize.