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It was a good attempt to use Ink. There were moments where I was confused on why certain things were happening, but your writing itself add a small amount of intrigue because of how you word certain sentences, but this also gets a bit distracting when trying to understand the character and what they are trying to do. 

I think you have some meaningful choices, which I think are important in branched narratives, so well done with that! It does need a bit of work, but I can see the base of the story in this.