The art style was just amazing! I has such a unique vibe, which is sustained and elevated by the writing. Reading the GDD also made me like this better, as I realized what it was truly trying to tell me. Truly a fantastic experience, and I would love to see more.
A couple of more notes (which I am pretty sure are mostly due to time constraints):
- 10 minutes felt too long, and I think in the first loop I was unable to return to Don after earning three items, which left me confused on what to do next.
- I feel like I broke the loop with Taddle at one point. He told me something along the lines of "here you go", and then I couldn't move anymore.
- I am on the fence as to wether a more clear interface where I could see what I was getting and what impact it would have on the ending I got. On the one hand, I think it would make it more game-y, and less of an experience, but I am unsure wether that would be something that you, as the author, would want. :)