I like the story and your message. Your writing and thoughts are very easy to relate to.
I'd really recommend having entering an input complete the text and having more text between each input. Having to wait for it scroll and having to keep pressing buttons gets tedious really fast.
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Thank you for the reply!
The text pacing was my deliberate attempt to simulate a thought process while moving in space. I.e., short lines between the inputs was supposed to motivate player to move through space as he moves through text. But your feedback suggests that this might not have worked as intended. I'll have to think what sort of input could simulate the efforts you make while walking, that are not as deliberate as pressing a key on the keypad.