Really Really good as always. The visuals really help in the whole vibe of the song and especially because you show when the motif comes up it is really nice.
I guess the only thing I could see improvement is in would be to have focused more on extending the motif into the melody more since as it is it feels almost like an easter egg as opposed to the main focus of the song.
also it ends a bit abruptly for my tastes.
Yes, I think the motif was the main inspiration for the arrangement, what chords I wanted to hear around it. I used it to build the melody and the chord progression. But when you listen to it, it can seem secondary, it's true :)
As for the ending, I tend to end on dominant chords, and I've been told that this results in an ending that doesn't feel like an ending. But I like ending that way. Come on, for you, for the next one, I'll end with a tonic chord.
