I didn't respond to the survey because I didn't feel qualified (?) to speak definitively on all the layers of detail working through your story and setting. You're the author, you know these things better. I will offer that, as your survey says, I too am experiencing "vampire fatigue" in storytelling; for me, it can't just revel in its own tropes, it has to offer something beyond the usual. Same goes for werewolves (hahaha), or anything else, really, with the weight of an established genre behind it. My take anyway. Be well!