This was a really well crafted story! With how the psyche of someone can change as well as mixing it with the supernatural, it was just so really cool to see such themes melded together!
The art was also very fun and expressive, the music too. Finding the astral bodies and seeing creepy things happen as time went on, they were done well!Only two parts of the story seemed to drag a little bit and that was because it took way too long to find the things, so maybe having some indication of how close you are to a thing could help. (Also some explanation on the spider as well, I think, would have added more to the story? It really changes from an eye to a spider that then just blinks out of reality? Don't get me wrong, it is a cool story and is really great, but it also seems a bit different and changed as it goes along and I don't know, it might just be me.)
But overall, you have crafted a great story and I enjoyed playing it thoroughly! Great job on it and good luck on future projects!