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Gonna try and be concise with constructive criticism here. Game is great! Honestly it's incredible that in 72 hours you all were able to make this game that I'm still trying to crack. The biggest thing is that I want to keep playing it. That's key. The art and music make it a very pleasant atmosphere to be in. All the sounds of clicking and UI are really subtle but really nice.

I was confused by seeing the +/-X "variable name" floating text after seeing the summary sheet. Is the text representative of the previous day's earnings? Shouldn't it show that before I see the summary and move on to the next day? Anyway I can work around that. It's just extra flair, and even if it is confusing to me, it might not be confusing to someone else. And it's a nice touch nonetheless! I can look past this.

I really like the idea of exploration of strategy. This game gives you a decent bit of wiggle room. Invest heavily in resources... Ideal ratio... Keep a low following... Aim for a smaller following at first... Lots of different paths, make it fun to try new things and play again, and again...

Some of the introductory text could use some grammar and logic review, but that's normal for a jam. I am still having a hard time determining what actions lead to what outcomes, so maybe some sort of rework of the summary sheep could help with that. They are all currently line items but maybe using lines to section off resources, from followers, from Karma related calculations... This would all make it easier for a noob like myself to learn.
Cheers!