Honestly it's so cute! I have to say, I'm laughing at the generous usage of blue everywhere but I'm also laughing at the mysterious dude being a complete different artstyle from Zeke (haven't unlocked him I don't think I have the heart to be rude to Zeke...). To be completely honest I was attracted to that title page, I nearly choked on my wheeze when I first saw it!
Love the story so far with what I've got! You've got some cute OCs~!!