Oh my god this was so visually stunning I am so amazed by it! I really love the overall design and aesthetic of this VN. There's something in the way of the lighting that really makes it like a dream, a horrible dream. I'm so in love with the overall progression of the story as well as the way you blended the horrific ending with something light such as Marcelo's cookies.
In a way, I'm so curious who exactly is the real "mastermind". Is it Bradan who's hypocritical by professing his love or grievances? Marcelo who's far too greedy and possessive over MC with such a "caretaker" mindset? Or is it the Past MC who's pettiness and twisted personality could have potentially orchestrated this?
Either way~ I'm so curious on what happened "that night" and if MC's amnesia had anything to do with this?
Also it's foul that the phone couldn't be unlocked!