Absolutely bone-chilling. The way Keith described how a person could suffer tremendously with burns and fires made me recall all the safety and burn survivor stories gave me chills, it was so vivid and visceral how he desribed the injuries and the fear was so palpable. I swear, I would react the same as Keith if Otis did something stupid like that, but I probably would try that wet handkerchief method, but either way I'd still rush after my stupid heroic friend and cry all the way.
The ending was so curious and mysterious, I'm so curious over what that creature was and why there was even a fire, I feel like the person Otis was trying to save could have used the fire? But I'm not fully sure how, the mystery is palpable and terrifying. Amazing job~!!