I have to say, I love how, even with the limited visuals and words, you were able to convey the sense of derealization even with MC feeling their own face melting and pooling due to their anxieties and insecurities. I also like how the face is directed towards MC's lover as if he would also be someone that would become another feature of a face that MC will remember either because he left, abandoned, or disappeared from MC's life.
I like how you can still feel the helpless and detachment in MC as they navigate through the different faces of people that struck a chord in them (whether it was for just a brief moment) and how, I kinda wish it was a bit longer so that we could read just how much one person can affect MC and their boiling pot of feelings. It was an amazing VN and while it didn't make me uneasy, it did make me feel sad and thoughtful.