Even though I know what happens since I played this last week, I felt chills the first time the life changed. I think you did a good job improving the Iris and Jasmine opening section, though I was the one who gave you suggestions on it lol. Pacing was good, I liked that some lives were much shorter than others since it hammers in that it's not time-based (like every day is a new life) but rather when you find any joy in it. I got the negative ending my first two times, and it wasn't until I chose the more neutral options when the lives changed that I even realized there was another happier ending where I find contentment with the joys of different lives. When that did happen it felt satisfying for me to scroll down and see the description you've put here. Very nice thumbs up emoji.