Oh my god. Oh my god. I need more of them--
HOW?? HOW WERE YOU ABLE TO MAKE ME WEEP FOR ZEV?? I HAVE ONLY KNOWN THIS MAN IN A MATTER OR MINUTES BUT I WOULD LEAP OVER TO HIS MECH AND HOLD HIM--
I love how you were able to mix in their backstory in just a few minutes, how Zev expressed both fondness and hate towards MC and how both of them, despite being on opposite ends, still respect and yearn each other (god, those rival animes are flashing back).
When I got the endings of Zev dying alone, it felt like a piece of me was gonna shatter. Even if MC had to return without Zev I know without a doubt in my soul that a piece of them broke apart when Zev died and they had to abandon him. SO WHEN I GOT THE ENDING WHEN MC DEFIED WHAT ZEV THOUGHT OF AND RUSHED AFTER ZEV MY HEART CRIED IN HAPPINESS!
That little epilogue!??!?! That brief moment of domestic dynamic between the two?! My dear developer I nearly cried in that moment. I am broken. I am sobbing. The sight of Zev blushing and crying-- Baby, I would gladly become a traitor so long as you're not alone.
It's just-- So well done for the time limit, word limit, limited assets, and so on. Absolutely amazing work, I adore it!