This was a very well-observed and written interpretation of a myth I was -until now- unaware of. And as usual, it made me more interested in the myth and urged me to check it out, so thank you! Breton is, regrettably, one of the cultures I haven't gotten around to learning much about yet, so I always appreciate a chance to remedy that.
The second person worked perfectly for this type of story, and I think the Twine delivery of the story worked to its benefit, which is something that's not always the case with these games.
I really liked it!!