Once again, I fully understand the precaution, yet you can make it more simple and less of a "consent" form. I play tons of games, which give that information very briefly and at the same time I don't feel like I have to read an entire page of "legal stuff". Its just a bit odd, as I said, nothing I am against at all, but just weird.
I forgot to mention that the game had couple of issues with the frame rate and I assume that's because of the "monster" asset size and optimization. During the sequence where the monster appears in the hallway, the frame drops for couple of seconds. Easy fix, but just a thing you should probably note.
Best to you!