I just read through your 3 blog posts for the first day. Really enjoyed it. I just love how different people's worlds and bookstores can be. I also like how you did writing between customers, and how you started roleplaying with characters and then integrating the different roll checks throughout the interaction. Some people do all of their rolls first and then write (which is what the book recommends) but it's just as valid and cool to do it in more of a serialized way. Thanks for posting those. I hope you're having fun with it.
Hah, I'm glad its not just bots reading my posts. Having all the rolls done first might be worth a shot as it lets you sorta set the whole scene - might play around with that the next day!
I've been having some challenges lately but still excited to write more, hopefully feeling well enough by Tuesday. The fact that this game book got me up and writing again is a testament in itself :) It's really been scratching a creative itch that's been missing in my day to day.