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Gave the game a go, the surreal style of the game looks great and it appears to have an interesting story to go with it, sadly the game is still really rough around the edges and it feels like it was barely play tested.

I don't see other games on your page so I'll assume this is your first game, and if that is the case, great job! this is REALLY good for a first try; Still I have to mention that the game has a LOT of typos and grammar mistakes that make following the story a challenge.

I also found a bug that happens to a lot of RPGmaker games in HTML5 when it fails to read an asset, in this case a sound file, being able to phase trough objects that you are not supposed to, grabbing infinite keys, the teddy bear disappearing even after not grabbing it, events repeating themselves, the VHS/blurry filter not appearing depending on how you enter the scene etc

I also would recommend putting some actual description and screenshots on the itchio page, that would sure help in people giving it a try since the game is very visually striking I am sure a lot of people will be interested in trying it.

This comment is not mean to discourage you, I see a lot of potential in this game and in your work as a developer and I would love to see what else can you make with a little more practice and time!

Keep up the good work!