I'd recommend getting an additional proofreader. I tried playing this, but even just a few minutes in, the amount of typos/grammatical errors ended up being too distracting and I had to drop it.
You are right, idk why people would downvote this(though their allowed to disagree ofc, as everyone has different opinions). But I want other people who might read the comments to know I don't downvote any comments even if I disagree with them. and I believe Itchio doesn't even register my downvote, so even if I did, it wouldn't show up on the counter publically. This goes the same for upvotes too, they won't show either.
Wow. This has made me rethink my opinion on downvoting. Like, just because i dont like that he quit so easily, doesnt mean i should be hateful or negative. Some people are just like that. Inhereby rescind my downvote. See, normally i tend to dv people who are negative themselves, but honestly, looking back, this is fair criticism hes making.