Monumental thanks for playing my game man! You, you are one of a kind! Thanks for the BEST feedback and calling me beautiful (even thou I am not). All the best 🍻❤🍷
OMG! Thank you so much! Your feedback means a lot. I loved your game and it was just phenomenal. Can't wait for your next project. Much appreciate the support! Cheers 🎉
Fourth in the line up. Welp... I zipped right pasted the top of the description content warning like a goon. But its well put together, surreal, odd... its going to be stuck in my thoughts for a good while... I haven't really bumped into many PT one hallway slowly altered bit much... but it's done really well here. Good work Niven.
Thanks for playing. I deeply appreciate the positive comments and I'm glad the game was successful in a way that it made you think about the story and how tragic things turned up. I did use the "cliché" PT spooks, but it all connected to the story and in my mind it was a representation of Kate's sanity and her guilt. Well, again, all the best to you and your channel 🎇
I didn't think of it as the time, but the slight shifts in the repeated hallway... the iterations do work really well as a representation the recursion one goes through retracing rethinking things. It fits really well.
I felt like I was watching a horror drama. In particular, the psychological portrayal of the main character was brought out quite well, making the game immersive! it was fun :)
+ I edited the video to make it a bit scarier than the original game.
Thanks for playing! I'm glad you found the story to be interesting and I was trying to make a game a bit more dramatic, movie like, so I guess it worked for you. Best to you and your channel friend!
Hey Niven! Loved the story and the ending, but I'm still wondering if Kate actually killed herself. Since she did say "...when I wake up, the nightmare does not end." and that might imply that she's in a loop.
Thanks a lot for playing my friend, I always appreciate your videos and feedback. I have you say, you are the only one, who asked that question and to be honest, I don't actually know, more like I can't tell. The story is strictly linear and tells the tragic story of both sisters. Now, you hear the gunshot, and the game ends, but was it an actual event that happened or was it a dream in her mind? - Not a bad theory, but again, I can't tell, because in a way it is up to you to interpret the ending, like a "glass half full, half empty" situation. Best of luck and thanks for the topic. Cheers!
I guess reducing stories to a single true sequence is not all that interesting. I'm actually glad you didn't strictly specify what happened since ambiguity leads to an extended amount of interesting interpretations of the story. Thanks for the reply and have a nice day/evening (^^)
I just finished watching the playthrough on your stream and I have to say man, your voice is shockingly good, I would assume you do voice overs for movies or animations, because you should definitely get hired for some serious role. Besides that, I liked how you presented my work to your audience and yeah, sorry about the story being too dark. Nevertheless, huge thanks once again and Happy Thanksgiving!
Thank you i appreciate it, I have been recently looking for voice over type work so that could be a possibility. But I did enjoy the game, i love playing these indies there's a lot of hidden talent that needs to be presented keep up the good work. If you have any other games to play on twitch or even in a YouTube video let me know =D
Thanks for playing. I really appreciate the feedback, it means a lot to me. Someone else actually asked me the same about the Portuguese. Unfortunately, for now, my projects aren't big enough to have multiple languages included, but that's an idea for the future. I would need to employ someone to do that for me, because I can't speak Portuguese so there is an interpreter needed. Thanks for the suggestion. Best to you and your channel!
SUCH A GOOD GAME! the jumpscares put me in another dimension and my dog came in and genuinely scared the sh*t out of me hahaha! had some real funny moments is this game it is perfect for a youtube video thanks again for the great game ! ENJOY THE VIDEO!! if you wanna see the dog she appears at the end haha
That dog needs a medal! She came in at the right time to comfort you and ahh, it was such a tear jerker, like I had a dog, unfortunately passed away 3 years ago and yeah. This was lovely. The video also, very emotional, all and all I deeply appreciate the feedback and support. All the best to you mate 💌
hahaha you're more than welcome my friend keep u the amazing work, I love how deep the story is on this cant wait to see more form you! glad you enjoyed it!!!
OMG! THANK YOU SO, SO VERY MUCH!!! Your work the reason why my game is successful and I can't imagine doing the visuals without it. Your work is truly amazing and thanks a lot for appreciating my silly work. Looking forward to your new assets, because I will always be there for the support. Best to you mate!
It's been a while since I played something of yours, man, congratulations, I'm happy that you continued with the projects and that they have evolved more and more. I really enjoyed the story of this very sad and scary game, you did another great job, keep it up
Huge thanks for playing! I always love to see content creators, who come back to play my games. It was really awesome. Thanks for the feedback and wish the best for you! Cheers!
Thanks for playing! Glad that you found the game creepy. I tried to do my best with creating a unique atmosphere. Truly appreciate the feedback. All the best to you and your channel!
I really enjoyed playing this, the symbolism behind it all became more and more apparent the more I played. I really hope people take the time to play through this properly and not make annoying scream vids. keep the games coming :)
Thanks for playing! I deeply appreciate your positive feedback. There are some cryptic hints to the story overall, besides the huge direct telling of what happened, but yeah. Again, your playthrough was superb. Best to you and your channel!
Thanks for playing friend! I watched the video and it was full of depth, emotions, really great playthrough. I hope the game wasn't too dark. Best of luck with the channel!
Thanks for playing and giving me such nice positive compliments - this really means a lot. I apologize if the games' story made it uncomfortable for you. All the best and wish your channel well. Cheers!
Monumental thanks, once again for playing. Glad that you found the game interesting. Hope to bring better content next time, although I can't promise about the next one being different in terms of darkness - will see. Best to you!
This little game was very well done ! I do wish it had two different endings though . I did not want it to end that way ! Your game is second and starts at 12:37
Loved the video 🎇Thank you so, so very much for supporting me and playing my game. I'm truly glad that you enjoyed the game. I understand about the endings, but I just wanted to share that one, very dark side to the story. In the future games, I'll try for the other endings. As usual, all the best to you and your channel. Cheers!
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Thanks a bunch for playing. It was truly bizarre, I agree. I'm glad you enjoyed the game overall. Best to you and your channel!
the ending was a blast
Thanks a lot for playing. Yeah, the ending was a bit dark. I very much appreciate the support. Wish all the best to you! Cheers!
Thanks for playing! I deeply appreciate the feedback as well as your support by making a great video for my game. Best to you and your channel 🎇
Thanks for playing. I'm glad the game was a win, means a lot man! Cheers ✌
Thanks for playing and I do appreciate the positive feedback. All the best to you and your channel 🎇
This. Was. Awesome. Loved the spookiness and the scares, and the story was really deep and heavy! Great job as always Niven!
Thanks for playing man! Always great to see your playthrough. Deeply appreciate the support and your awesome feedback. Best to you 🍻
You're welcome! And as always, thanks for the awesome games! I can't wait to play the next one!
Niven, how are you doing mate? Sorry to be late, but I guess better late than never lol
Awesome game, I had a lot of fun with it. You keep producing quality games, and I'm really waiting for even bigger projects.
Keep grinding!
Monumental thanks for playing my game man! You, you are one of a kind! Thanks for the BEST feedback and calling me beautiful (even thou I am not). All the best 🍻❤🍷
Wow, that was super dark. Especially the ending caught me off-guard. Great job!
OMG! Thank you so much! Your feedback means a lot. I loved your game and it was just phenomenal. Can't wait for your next project. Much appreciate the support! Cheers 🎉
really nice little game!
Thanks for playing. I liked the commentary, it was sharp and fast. Glad that you enjoyed the story. Best to you!
Good job really nice sort horror experience I really enjoyed it, also made a video on it if you're interested:
Thanks for playing! I deeply appreciate the feedback and honest review of my game. Wish all the best to you and your channel!
Thanks for playing. I deeply appreciate the positive comments and I'm glad the game was successful in a way that it made you think about the story and how tragic things turned up. I did use the "cliché" PT spooks, but it all connected to the story and in my mind it was a representation of Kate's sanity and her guilt. Well, again, all the best to you and your channel 🎇
I didn't think of it as the time, but the slight shifts in the repeated hallway... the iterations do work really well as a representation the recursion one goes through retracing rethinking things. It fits really well.
I enjoyed the story and game they both caught me off guard
Thanks for playing my game. All the best to you mate!
Was a cool horror game, with a sad story. Enjoyed the experience won't post more for spoiler purposes, keep up the great work and left a follow!
Thanks for playing. I deeply appreciate the feedback, the video and thanks for the support as well. All the best to you and your channel. Cheers 🍻
I felt like I was watching a horror drama. In particular, the psychological portrayal of the main character was brought out quite well, making the game immersive! it was fun :)
+ I edited the video to make it a bit scarier than the original game.
Thanks for playing! I'm glad you found the story to be interesting and I was trying to make a game a bit more dramatic, movie like, so I guess it worked for you. Best to you and your channel friend!
this was good
Thanks for playing. I'm glad you liked this game. All the best to you and your channel. Cheers!
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Hey Niven! Loved the story and the ending, but I'm still wondering if Kate actually killed herself. Since she did say "...when I wake up, the nightmare does not end." and that might imply that she's in a loop.
Would love to know more about the story! ( ^ ^)
Thanks a lot for playing my friend, I always appreciate your videos and feedback. I have you say, you are the only one, who asked that question and to be honest, I don't actually know, more like I can't tell. The story is strictly linear and tells the tragic story of both sisters. Now, you hear the gunshot, and the game ends, but was it an actual event that happened or was it a dream in her mind? - Not a bad theory, but again, I can't tell, because in a way it is up to you to interpret the ending, like a "glass half full, half empty" situation.
Best of luck and thanks for the topic. Cheers!
I guess reducing stories to a single true sequence is not all that interesting. I'm actually glad you didn't strictly specify what happened since ambiguity leads to an extended amount of interesting interpretations of the story. Thanks for the reply and have a nice day/evening (^^)
Hello, I will be playing this live tomorrow 11/23 around 2-3 PM EST =D.
Thank you so much Twalls! I will definitely check out the stream! Appreciate the support! Best to you 💌
I just finished watching the playthrough on your stream and I have to say man, your voice is shockingly good, I would assume you do voice overs for movies or animations, because you should definitely get hired for some serious role. Besides that, I liked how you presented my work to your audience and yeah, sorry about the story being too dark. Nevertheless, huge thanks once again and Happy Thanksgiving!
Thank you i appreciate it, I have been recently looking for voice over type work so that could be a possibility. But I did enjoy the game, i love playing these indies there's a lot of hidden talent that needs to be presented keep up the good work. If you have any other games to play on twitch or even in a YouTube video let me know =D
Loved the game!!
Thanks for playing! I appreciate the feedback and nice comments. All the best to your YT channel mate!
creepy game but I feel like I'm missing something.
Thanks for playing. I deeply appreciate the feedback and support. Hope my comment on your channel explained some things. Best to you and your channel!
It helped explain a lot thank you for that, I can't wait to see what else you might do.
I thought the story was incredible. Great game, very engaging.
I would like to ask, if possible, include subtitles in Brazilian Portuguese. There are many Brazilian fans who like to play and watch! <3
Thanks for playing. I really appreciate the feedback, it means a lot to me. Someone else actually asked me the same about the Portuguese. Unfortunately, for now, my projects aren't big enough to have multiple languages included, but that's an idea for the future. I would need to employ someone to do that for me, because I can't speak Portuguese so there is an interpreter needed. Thanks for the suggestion.
Best to you and your channel!
Thanks a lot for playing. Liked the playthrough. Best to you and your channel!
ok
Thanks for playing and thank you for the feedback. Will do better next time, as always. Cheers!
SUCH A GOOD GAME! the jumpscares put me in another dimension and my dog came in and genuinely scared the sh*t out of me hahaha! had some real funny moments is this game it is perfect for a youtube video thanks again for the great game ! ENJOY THE VIDEO!! if you wanna see the dog she appears at the end haha
That dog needs a medal! She came in at the right time to comfort you and ahh, it was such a tear jerker, like I had a dog, unfortunately passed away 3 years ago and yeah. This was lovely. The video also, very emotional, all and all I deeply appreciate the feedback and support. All the best to you mate 💌
hahaha you're more than welcome my friend keep u the amazing work, I love how deep the story is on this cant wait to see more form you! glad you enjoyed it!!!
This is pretty cool! I'm also very happy to see some of my assets in your game! :)
OMG! THANK YOU SO, SO VERY MUCH!!!
Your work the reason why my game is successful and I can't imagine doing the visuals without it. Your work is truly amazing and thanks a lot for appreciating my silly work. Looking forward to your new assets, because I will always be there for the support. Best to you mate!
Thank you!
Thanks for playing. I'm glad you enjoyed the atmosphere. All the best to you and your channel mate, cheers 🍻
It's been a while since I played something of yours, man, congratulations, I'm happy that you continued with the projects and that they have evolved more and more. I really enjoyed the story of this very sad and scary game, you did another great job, keep it up
Gameplay PT-BR
Huge thanks for playing! I always love to see content creators, who come back to play my games. It was really awesome. Thanks for the feedback and wish the best for you! Cheers!
i made a gameplay out of this game
so cool
Thanks a bunch for playing. Liked the video! Your feedback is much appreciated. Best to you mate!
Thanks for playing! Glad that you found the game creepy. I tried to do my best with creating a unique atmosphere. Truly appreciate the feedback. All the best to you and your channel!
😲AWESOME GAME😲
Thanks for playing my game. Glad that you found it awesome - 😊
All the best to you and your channel!
I really enjoyed playing this, the symbolism behind it all became more and more apparent the more I played. I really hope people take the time to play through this properly and not make annoying scream vids. keep the games coming :)
Thanks for playing! I deeply appreciate your positive feedback. There are some cryptic hints to the story overall, besides the huge direct telling of what happened, but yeah. Again, your playthrough was superb. Best to you and your channel!
this seemed like it had a dark meaning
Thanks for playing friend! I watched the video and it was full of depth, emotions, really great playthrough. I hope the game wasn't too dark. Best of luck with the channel!
it looks like you really know what you're doing Niven, this game spooked the hell outa me and made me sad at the same time. Amazing job
Thanks for playing and giving me such nice positive compliments - this really means a lot. I apologize if the games' story made it uncomfortable for you. All the best and wish your channel well. Cheers!
Really great game! I had fun playing it!
Thanks for playing. Glad that you liked the game. The video was great. Best to you and your channel!
Incoherence is a fun, short horror game that have you feel sad about the two sisters. They deserved so much :(
Thanks for playing. Yeah, the story was a bit sad. I really appreciate the feedback. Best to you!
It made me feel sad and scared, good job
Thanks for playing. I am glad you had a spooky experience. Best to you Fabia 🤟
This definitely made me feel some sort of way ... holy cow!
Thanks for playing my game. I'm glad that the game was impactful and you had an interesting experience. Best to you and good luck with the channel!
Aw, thanks so much ... I need the luck! lol
Nice short horror game!
Thanks for playing. I truly appreciate the positive feedback and thanks for supporting me, the video was great. Best to you friend!
Really awesome short horror game! Love all of your stuff and looking forward to the next one!
Monumental thanks, once again for playing. Glad that you found the game interesting. Hope to bring better content next time, although I can't promise about the next one being different in terms of darkness - will see. Best to you!
Really good game looking forward to play more of your games
Thanks for playing Palaros, you are amazing! I deeply appreciate your continuous support and thanks once again for the kind feedback. Best to you!
This little game was very well done ! I do wish it had two different endings though . I did not want it to end that way ! Your game is second and starts at 12:37
Loved the video 🎇Thank you so, so very much for supporting me and playing my game. I'm truly glad that you enjoyed the game. I understand about the endings, but I just wanted to share that one, very dark side to the story. In the future games, I'll try for the other endings. As usual, all the best to you and your channel. Cheers!