I appreciate the feedback you gave since it really helps me for future games, so thanks again for the comments!
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I've been back and found the key this time and finished the experience. I can see what you was going for and there was some cool moments I just feel the pacing is a bit slow and the lighting to dark. However the van based mechanics was really good and the first surprise was also very good with the banging and the mystery. Maybe could of been pushed further reappearing later on like maybe the bike being outside the cabin as you approach.
Enjoyed the play through and individual story beats but would like it all to flow smoother and brighter.
Thank you for finishing it and for letting me know which parts you liked! That's a great suggestion with the bike appearing at the house, that would've been cool and creepy! And I will definitely work harder on pacing and lighting in the future, maybe for a full version of this game. Thank you again for the comments and suggestions!