Interesting concept. I mention it in the video, but I think I would have liked snippets of poems as we do the candles, or a more engaging ending that is explained a bit better. I like what's done, just wish the story felt a bit more solid! Linkeda the time played.
Thank you for playing my game!
I see you played version 1.1 in which there was a minor bug making it difficult to find the key so that might have been the cause of the confusion :). Additionally, in version 1.2 I changed the intro a bit to guide the player to approach the car because there you can read the whole poem.
As for the snippets of the poem, that was actually my initial idea but it didn't really work so I gave up on it.
Overall, thank you so much for your comments, I have taken them to heart and will perhaps implement some! <3
Ahh I can definitely see how that direction would be good - I must have missed the poem at the car if it was in the version I played, which is unfortunate but I'll probably just check it out solo to read the poem! It felt like such a strange thing not being able to read the rest!! :o
Overall not a bad experience at all!! I like the ideas you were working with!