i really enjoy the writing style, and how attempting to be a better person makes the game slap you in the face and force you to go with the less positive choices in the beginning, its funny. reminds me of the stanley parables narrator kinda! the color coded text dialogue great, my one suggestion is maybe make jones' color a bit more contrasting with the background? the cliffhanger made me excited to see what mickey needs to steal, and id love to see what she looks like