Wow, the description in the writing is a great quality and produces a great atmosphere. So far, this has been some of the best writing I've stumbled upon in this jam!
Honestly, I feel that there is a great deal of professionalism in this visual novel. The art is fantastic, especially the backgrounds but also the character art as well. I loved how near the beginning the silhouette approached us, very creepy, fantastic. There's some little clever moments in this game where I feel that the team are very confident in creating a beautiful, haunting visual novel.
I do recommend next time to have some place-holding music. Even if the music is not what you intend in the finished piece, place holder music would have bolstered the atmosphere that the team worked tirelessly to create.
Lovely game page too, it describes the game well and makes it easier to learn more about the team. Again, with that feeling of professionalism.
Lovely work, I look forward to seeing further projects from these team members.
행운을빌어 / Best of luck!
Ocelot