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Having a lot of fun with this game, excellent work :) Surprisingly well-written characters, pretty intriguing story. Art style wasn't for me at the start, but I'm quickly liking it more as I play.

Only a few criticisms, namely:
1) The large amount of hero worship right out of the gate that only escalates continuously, becoming an admittedly decent joke in Tomoe's talks in the form of ridiculous rumours. Yes, being the only male in town and with immense strength contributes, but the degree we see of everyone fighting each other to suck your dick is too much lol.
2) A lot of grammar mistakes, I'm guessing English is a second language, doesn't look bad enough to be a translator issue, honestly not that bad overall, good work :) just could use a quick sweep and fix is all.
3) Shika's low mental maturity makes me rather uncomfortable in scenes with her, especially backed up by her very naive dialogue.

Oh, and I found a strange bug. When fishing was unlocked and they said a store would be coming, I fished a whole bunch in advance, but then when I got the store, my fish was all listed as zero. Checked my inventory, and despite it saying I have fish, all types were listed as zero.
I found a fix, in that when the game told me to fish for Charlotte, the counter worked only for fish gotten thereafter. And, if I check my inventory then load before I fished, the inventory shows what it was before the load. So I just have to fish, load the game, sell what I have and the bugged fish number will gradually go back down to what it should be.
Not sure why the fish type/rank counter didn't work while the overall one did at that point, but just so you know :) (v0.3.0 Public, if that helps)