This game is absolutely adorable, I love it, the sense of kids book magic is overwhelmingly good, the characters are so cute, the story is short but sweet and when the game gets spooky well, it gets spooky alright.
Is rare to see Visual Novels developed in Unity, and I think this one looks gorgeous but it should be noted that the text at the end fades before anyone can actually read it, should let the player click to skip, also although the text scrolling effect really gives the game a book vibe that fits perfectly I think it should be better to make it a little faster (or make a menu option for scrolling speed).
Eva is absolutely adorable and terrifying at the same time, actually, all the cast in this small game is so adorable, I love it all, I hope you keep making games like this one because it was such a treat for this Halloween season.
Keep up the good work!