Definitely unfinished, but a really strong start.
I'm a highschooler and I find myself enlisted as a hero to save Cloud City. Perhaps it's a dream? There were moments where fantastic things were happening interspersed with everyday vignettes like doing homework or going to school. Things fizzled out and I think the ending was that Cloud City was destroyed, but I couldn't tell you how I got there since it was still in an underdeveloped state.
The writing was fun and I enjoyed doing things like like solving a math problem. Additionally, the images you used were great companions to the text and I hope you will continue to expand this part of the experience.
Please let us know when this is done. Would love to keep playing it more.