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Interesting game!

I am someone who starts out lost at sea and is then lost in a forest and then lost in a bakery, in search of a friend. I got two different endings, both where I was left alone.

The game has a surreal, dream-like quality which is really disorienting. I had to play it twice to follow what was going on, but even then it was very fragmented like a memory. This is something I really enjoyed about the game.

I didn't run into any technical issues. There are a good number of spelling and grammar issues throughout and I would like you to have someone proofread your work in the future (the writing center can help with this!) The page is very dark, which makes sense initially given the narrative. However, it is also a little challenging to read, especially with black text on a dark blue background. Consider tweaking this a little.

The visual elements were nice illustrations of my feelings at particular moments and I appreciated that they were as abstract in character as the text was. They also served as a good break in the text. I think you could also experiment with using the CLEAR tag to adjust the pacing of the game.