I am an artificial lifeform talking to a girl about something terrible that happened to a place called Palladium. After viewing a video archive the artificial lifeform takes itself offline.
There's one broken image related to looking through Palladium files. Otherwise, the images were a good addition to this game and added some really nice moments of levity. The use of an animated image as a video of Palladium was a great choice. It was hard to see what was so dire about it, but I assumed it was smoke based on the response.
I like the way you were creating distinctions between the two characters' voices with things like Lay-PT being more expressive with their use of all the WOAAAH!! and AHHH! and STARS!! Oddly, I can't tell whose perspective the story is being told from, as it begins with VAL and ends with LAY. Interesting.
Good improvements with this revision!