(Copied from my Spooktober rating page review to help this game within itch.io's algorithm!)
This was a fun time! I adore the visuals you used for this VN - they're super cute and expressive. I'm impressed you managed to create so many dynamic scenes in such a short period of time - and the glitch effects with the Virtual Evelyn are fantastic too.
The story made me smile a lot as well: I was pleasantly surprised with how sweet the good ending was, and the sillier endings made me laugh. Also, an anime and games fan, the references you made throughout made me chuckle (shoutout to Buzzerk and Within Our General Vicinity in particular).
Well done on the whole!