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Thinking about the eBook, indicate whether you agree or disagree with the following statements:

 

                                           

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Do you think the navigation and page indication help to create a good user experience?

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Was the visual- and functional-consistency satisfying?

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Do you think the story was created using User-Centerd-Design?

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Was the accessibility and input methods good enough?

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Questions for target and experienced readers:

 

Thinking about the eBook, indicate whether you agree or disagree with the following statements:

 

                                           

Strongly Disagree

Disagree

Slightly Disagree

Neutral

Slightly Agree

Agree

Strongly Agree

Not  Applicable

Have you fun interacting with the elements in the eBook?

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Do you think the chosen colours are proper for this type of story?

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Do you have trouble differentiating between text, background, and UI elements?

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Do you think the feedback was appropriate when interacting with the eBook elements (sound, hover effect)?

Agree

 

General Feedback:

Hi Giona,

You have created a fantastic eBook prototype; the interactive elements are amazing. The sound effects are clear and crips, the voice over matches the progression of the text boldening.  The graphical elements, especially the title page, enhance the user experience through UX design principles and models.

The only things that detract from the user’s experience is the repeated interactive visual that all your story pages consist of, making a bit repetitive in terms of visual appeal. Additionally, the white writing can be a little hard to see initially, however one the writing turns black it is completely legible.

Overall, I can see you have put a massive amount of work into this prototype, your abilities within the Unity program far exceed my own and I look forward to seeing the finished product.

Kind regards,

 

Jackson Camporeale

 

GCFLearningFree. (2016, August 11). Beginning Graphic Design: Typography [Video]. YouTube.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sByzHoiYFX0

Reynolds, G. (2008). The Big Four: Contrast, Repetition, Alignment, Proximity. Presentation Zen.

https://www.presentationzen.com/chapter6_spread.pdf#:~:text=The%20principle%20says%20that%20related%20items%20should%20be,near%20to%20each%20other%20into%20a%20single%20unit.

Hello Jackson,

Thank you for your feedback!
As I already said in the tutorial, and as you see, the sprites for the other sites were still missing on the day you looked at the eBook. They are included in the current version.

I know the white text is not good to read, but this is on purpose because the reader should read along with the narrator. If you toggle the narrator sound, you will see that the text changes the colour to the right colour per page.

Thanks again for your feedback.


Cheers

G.