This was a really interesting idea! I like the lore and character designs especially. I thought the clues were well incorporated and cleverly used to allow the reader to solve the mysteries alongside the characters. The music, backgrounds, and sound effects got the job done, helping to set the creepy, suspenseful mood. And I like all the different angles that were visually incorporated during the scenes, really helped with the immersion that we were witnessing the story unfold. The overall plot was wonderfully paced, well structured, and kept me in suspense all throughout. My only criticism is I thought the ending paled in comparison to the rest of the story. Once the murderer started doing their villainous monologue, revealing all their secrets ... the writing felt forced and rushed to me. While the other characters' reactions to the situation left me feeling unsatisfied with how things turned out. Aside from that though, I thought it was very well done! Murder mysteries are a challenge to write, so I respect all the thought and effort that was put into this one.