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Hello Chloe,

Thanks for your feedback.

I will respond to your recommendations here:
When you looked at the eBook, there were no sprites except the one on the start page, which had changed. So maybe you want to update your feedback regarding this.

I like that you saw that I used Gestalt design principles. I intended to use them and did so, but you are the first person talking about it. I aimed to reduce the reader's cognitive load, and you proved that it worked.

You named the right audience for my eBook, so I am happy that I could correctly create an eBook that targeted the audience I wanted.

Your concerns are right about the text size. The size is between 36px and 38px, depending on the amount of text. The first thing I did after inserting the text was test it on my mobile device, and it looked good. Also, I asked my family, which mainly uses mobile devices, to give me some feedback about the text size, and all agreed that the size was appropriate.

Thank you very much for your feedback!

Have a nice day

G.