Ohh, and I though for a moment I missed the elevator, because it is in the text and not on the side, like not seeing the trees in a forest kinda thing. You updated. The short scene clarifies much visually, like that it is 3rd person walking simulator and you can play a female. Maybe brag about how you can also zoom to 1st person view. If you put another shot beside it with a male being the protagonist, that should clear up things further.
Basically look how popular games do it. It is about presentation. You are not selling to investors, but to customers. Horny customers with short attention spans and a browse catalogue of over 10k adult games on itch and unhelpful features to find stuff. If you are popular it is self fulfilling because you get sorted higher in browse.
If you want to further optimse, there is this hover stuff, when you did not already visit the game page. When the mouse is over the game thumbnail. You have three pictures for that, including your thumbnail. Some can even be animated, but not sure how as is your second screen already. You might include an action shot, like the elevator or the couch scene. Your first screen is not very good, because one can not see what is going on there. The first two screenshots on the game pages are displayed when moving the mouse over the thumbnail. If you use a female protagonist in those, you should make it clear in one of the two descriptions or the other screenshot, that you can chose your gender. While some search out lewd games where you can play females, others avoid it.
And the text currently reads ""and when you return f r om the gate - it's not you, nevermore.." ｡˚ ✧ ˚⋆｡ ✧˚ ｡★⋆ ˚｡ The last - lust - lost Gate - Noire ! You may seen "
I do not know if this is always taken from the game description or if it can be edited separatly, to allow for short description.
The text that is seen without hovering is "Brutal porn-comedy world in a dystopian corporeli" (Huh. That gets arbitrarily cut off, depending on zoom level and other influence. On your creator page, it is displayed in full. In browse, it is not. Not for me at least, no matter how I zoom.)
I am not sure if brutal will apply, but there were those foot prints. I was actually concerened that this would be some gore game. Maybe it will even have this elements, but it does not fit with the claims of comedy. Maybe this is translation issue, what brutal can mean. (cruel, bloody, merciless, violent etc)
Will be a while till I get to continue playing. Wish you luck, the unity situation might be benefitial for you.