I think in general this was well done, though not my type of game so having a hard time rating it and giving feedback.
As mentioned the starting text was hard to read, and there were a few times where the text in game pushed some of the UI to the right. Though for the most part in game the text was easier to read so that was good since it seems to be mostly a text based game.
Also as mentioned, the game play was a bit too much clicking for me, but I understand this is a genre that others enjoy so I can't knock it for that. That said, there were a few steps that made doing the UI more tedious, like the connection to email, it would take several steps to connect and say the same thing until you got to it. The first time it was interesting/fun, but maybe remove some of those dialog steps during that.
It was a interesting story and I wanted to go through more of it but it was a bit too much clicking for me. Maybe it could have shown more of the dialog at a time, so pages of back and forth that I could click through instead of each line at a time. Though keep the interesting effects when certain things happened, they'd have their own page.
I wish I could give better comments for this type of game. Sorry.