This is a very creative story but I would leave you some feedback on it:
- Asking players to input text that doesn't impact anything is a very odd thing to do. It removes the players ability to feel like they can impact the story. If the player doesn't have any impact, that's totally okay. There are plenty of games where you can't change the story, but it's causes a negative reaction if your input doesn't actually do anything.
- The image resolution is really poor. Most monitors are a minimum of 1920x1080 resolution, so when you use a resolution that is significantly smaller, it looks really stretched and blurry.
- I do think this was a very creative use HTML and would love to see more games made utilizing HTML in a similar way
All in all, I think you've got a really good concept here and with some more work, you'll be making some incredible games in no time.
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Thank you. I love your feedback, next time I will try to fix the resolution, and make the the player feel like they can actually change the game. Thanks so much. It’s really hard to make a game when you can’t spend a cent on it. But I won’t let that be an excuse for making a poor quality game. Again, thanks so much.