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This game needs some work. It definitely has a base and I had some fun playing for about 4 hours, but there are so many things that had me puzzled, and things that just take me out of the game. 

The interactions with some of the girls are just weird, they all seem to come from a guys perspective which is not a turn on. It's hard to build a solid connection with any of the girls when they start talking like a dude or just start cussing at random people, and when some of the girls do say something cute the main characters response seem so out of pocket by just calling them bitches or sluts. I think trying to run the scenarios past a few girls and see how they would respond might help make the interactions a little better.

It would also be cool to have the option to try and romance characters just on an every day bases, like finding flowers and bringing them to a girl, or having conversations with them and saying the right things to boost the relationship. Right now the romance feels forced. You have to do a mission, that is mandatory to progress the game, and as a biproduct you romance a character and then do the deed. What if I didn't even want to romance that character? But you have to in order to progress the game... 

The language translation is not the best. Some of the options on the dates due to the translation had me confused on what I was about to say to them. Nothing takes me out of a game like having to reread a sentence and still being confused as to what I or a character just said, especially when the this is a game that most people want to be intimately immersed into. 

I am not writing this to bash the game, I definitely had some fun and look forward to future updates. I can tell a good amount of time and work went into this game so I just want to help improve it, so I am writing this to provide some constructive feed back that might help improve some aspects of the game. 

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You can list the exact moments that are puzzling so I’ll add some hints or try to rewrite them.

I don’t understand what you meant by girls talking like dudes, better point at the exact dialogues. If you mean Naira speaking harshly sometimes and attacking Lina then it’s intended part of her character.

I struggle to remind when MC called anyone a bitch after they do something cute. The only time I remember is MC calling a bitch Irena after the fight, since she tried to kill him.

Everyday iterations like bringing the flowers are planned for the living together mode. The meeting quest and the first date are mandatory to reveal the girl to player, further dates won’t be mandatory (opposite, you can live only with one girl at your home).

We’re improving on language, I believe the last episodes are good enough. The first ones has issue, we’ll rewrite them over time. We already remade and rewritten the first scene with Naira is episode 8, you can check it (or wait till it’s free) to compare the existing cellar scene and the new one.