I awoke in a ravaged city and began making my way through it, noting the destruction as I moved along. On my first playthrough, the game abruptly ended with me making a camp and preparing to go to sleep.
I played the game three times and didn't experience anything which negatively affected the experience. There were some long convoluted sentences that could use some revision and the title seems to be chopped short, but overall, the writing had an effective somber tone to describe what was happening.
The game seemed to end rather abruptly each playthrough, which left me wanting some sort of resolution to the experience.
Overall, the voice in your writing was the most memorable aspect of the game. It was really excellent. You described things in such vivid detail and created an interesting and dark world to visit. Very good job.