I am being broken up with after Baltimore Comic Con, but I'm not exactly sure why. Seems like I bought some prints that the other person didn't appreciate?!
The ending was a bit abrupt. I was in a fight that started to escalate but then just suddenly ended with the reasoning.
I didn't run into anything which negatively affected the experience. There were a number of typos (for example, ur and aparpartment) as well as punctuation and capitalization issues that could be fixed by having someone else proofread your game. Please reach out to someone in the future to do this proofreading work for you. Please also make the viewport window larger and check the Fullscreen button option in the Dashboard unless you have a specific stylistic need that would require you to do something else.
Something which I thought was very effective was your ability to express how confusing and sudden an argument, or breakup, can happen. In the moments before the ending, it felt very tense and dramatic.