Really interesting! I think the reveal is effective, and makes you feel bad for Amanda, as you realize that she was sent to a conversion camp by her own parents. I'd be interested in seeing the main character, Sarah's, thoughts on the matter, maybe exploring how it impacts her relationship with her parents? Does she support it? Is she against it? However, it's also effective to leave the player with just that reveal, leaving up to the imagination how Sarah felt exactly. Along with this, there are a few typos, but they can easily be fixed/changed. The descriptions are also really strong & realistic! I enjoy being able to explore and figure out more and more as you progress. I'm excited to see where this goes if you do more with it :D!