Very descriptive! I enjoyed the worldbuilding here quite a lot, it was immersive and I really felt what was happening. I ran into an issue where when I got shot in the coffee shop, I was able to continue onwards even though it was I was on the ground bleeding :( I also wish some of the endings were just slightly different, as most of them just ended up with "you are ok and you keep going". Maybe a bit more conflict or good/bad endings just to make the choices feel more meaningful?