This made me extremely happy as I was reading it, thank you! You are one heck of a writer, I look forward to seeing how your games turn out.
Motivation to make game = 300%.
I'm glad I've helped your motivation. I really did enjoy the experience you created and hope that it gets completed. I did a second playthrough of the demo and made screenshots of some of the issues I found during; most are just to do with text. Would these be useful to you? I can add annotation if needed.
Yeah, it's hard to spot it in your own stuff even when it's just writing, nevermind when you're building a whole game on top of that. There's quite a few so, if you want, you can add me on Discord (John Green#4655) and I'll DM them (with the corrections posted underneath each), unless you have another idea that's more convenient for you.